Line Editing

Proof Positive can edit your writing at the scene and sentence level

We’ll focus on scenes, paragraphs, and sentences to improve your book’s flow and clarity. We’ll look for ways to tighten and strengthen your prose. We flag sentences and paragraphs that can be condensed, expanded, or moved to create more emotional impact, and give you suggested rewrites wherever possible. Line edits are best done in later drafts after your book’s overall structure is in good shape and before you need to make it perfect for submission or publication.

Dana Dash
Dana Dash: First Girl on the Moon is a novel for tweens, focusing on STEM, empowering women and girls in tech, collaboration, aliens, monsters, and robots. You can find out more at